Today, instead of art journaling, I decided to do something a little different.
I happened to be looking through my file cabinet, and stumbled upon a folder with some of my really old poetry. So today, to combat a bit of writer’s block, I decided to recycle a couple of old poems.
I hope you like them.
The first one, is a sappy love poem.
I love you
I love you
I love you for the years that pass, that we share together
I love you for the memories
I love you for the man that you are
I love you for the artist you allow me to be, the crazy, mad woman you encourage me to be, I
love you
I love you for the grey hairs in my head that I wonder if you caused
I love you for the way you tilt your head when you laugh, I
love you
I love you for the stories you tell me about life in
Puerto Rico, I
love you for seeing eye to eye with me,
I
love you
and though years pass, and
life happens
bodies age, and the world changes constantly
I
love you
always
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so that’s that one. Do you want to see the original? Well you’re lucky that I LIKE the original. So, here goes (same title, duh)
I love you for what I see in you
I love you for who I am when I am with you
I love you
I love you more than the stars in the sky at night
I love you more than the brighthness of the sun in the day, and coolness of the moon at night
I love you more than all those things:
I love you for all eternity
You
are the smile on my face when I hear a love song
you
are the innocence in me that I felt as a child,
you
I love you like my heart beating
like the rain pouring
and more than that,
I love you
always
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This next one, is my ode to an old beatnick, who used to sit in Van Gogh’s Ear. Every tuesday (for the open mic) he would read his poems, and you could tell, he was a real beatnick. His poems inspired me to write this one, about 13 or 14 years ago. First, the remake, then you can check out the original. Okay?
So, the remake.
It’s called:
Clean
Clean
clean
clean
room
face
curls
love
clean
clean hands
clean mouth
no potty mouth
clean
wash my hands and feet, I’m
clean
dirty
unclean
unkempt
gotta keep clean
clean
clean
clean
hands
feet
soul
heart
mind
body
gotta wash my soul with organic soap
before “love” comes around,
before
bibles come sneaking
make up my own philosophy
my OWN truth, my
own
religion
think up some thoughts
make them up as I go
along
follow all the rules
for when “love” comes around….
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so that’s that. Granted, it’s me being a skeptic. But I kind of am, anyway.
So here’s the original.
I don’t like it very much. I’ll share it with you anyway, though.
clean room
clean face
clean hair
i wash my hands
for divinity
and love
dirty room
unclean face
gotta clean myself
gotta wash myself with color safe bleach,
wash my sins away,
gotta wash my face
my teeth and nails
before grace shows itself
to me
gotta think up some thoughts
make up my own philosophy
on life and god and nonsense
my very own
truth
gotta think up some thoughts
make them up as I go along
gotta impress
gotta follow all the rules
when “love” comes around…..
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again yeah. I was being a skeptic. I wrote this when I left the pentecostal church and went off to philosophize on my own.
So, here’s the inspiration for you: why don’t you dig up some of your old work, and re-do it? Weather it’s poetry, prose, short stories, or drawing, or whatever. It’s fun. Dig up your old work, and re-work it! See what you come up with.